上海高考英语作文模拟专项练习

1.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
高考临近,你的同学李磊始终无法积极地面对学习上的压力,无法调整好心态, 这使他非常苦恼。 作为学校心理社团的成员,请您给他写一封电子邮件,帮助他调整心态,内容主要涵盖以下几方面的内容:
1) 帮助他分析一下现在所面临的困境;
2) 提供一些调整心态的方法和手段。(例如,合理安排作息;做必要的运动;通过网络等多种途径保持与老师和同学的沟通,等等。)
范文:
Dear Li Lei,
Knowing that you are facing problems about dealing with study pressure, I am very willing to help you.
First of all, you need to know you are not alone, which means many students have the same trouble as yours. As the National College Entrance Examination is coming, everyone expects to keep improving and get a satisfying result. Feeling stressed is normal at present, and that’s the very source your energy comes from. However, if sometimes the pressure is too much to bear, you are supposed to adjust mindset. Here are some recommended ways: Make arrangements for reasonable daily routine and necessary physical training; keep in touch with your teachers and classmates through network and other ways.
Hope my advice can help and wish you go through difficulties.
Yours sincerely,
Liu Ming
1.词汇积累
处理:deal with→handle
承受:bear→endure
建议:advice→suggestion
困难:difficulty→trouble
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Feeling stressed is normal at present, and that’s the very source your energy comes from.
拓展句:Feeling stressed is the very source your energy comes from, which is normal at present.
2. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是实验中学高三学生龚瞩, 下个月学校即将迎来 35 周年校庆,现在策划团队向全校同学征集校庆当天各项活动的“金点子”。请给学生会写一封电子邮件,谈谈自己的方案并说明理由。
范文:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Gong Zhu, a senior three student. I am writing to share my thoughts on the 35th anniversary.
In my opinion, we can make the 35-year development of the school into PPT and play it on the big screen, so that all teachers and students can know more about our school. Besides, we can invite alumni who have graduated to come back and tell us something about the past of the school and how they spent their youth here, which can inspire us students to work hard. In addition, a live painting can be held to let students draw a picture of their ideal campus. I believe that this activity will encourage students to build a better campus.
If my suggestions can be adopted I will be grateful.
Yours,
Gong Zhu
1.词汇积累
想法:idea→thought
在我看来:as far as I am concerned→in my opinion
更了解:have a better understanding of→know more about
感激的:thankful→grateful
2.句型拓展
合并简单句
原句:In addition, a live painting can be held to let students draw a picture of their ideal campus. I believe that this activity will encourage students to build a better campus.
拓展句:In addition, a live painting can be held to let students draw a picture of their ideal campus, which I believe will encourage students to build a better campus.
3. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学的李明,最近学校正筹划建立“线上图书馆”,鼓励同学们多读书,读好书。为了更好地为同学们服务,图书馆现向大家征集建议。请你为图书馆负责人写一封邮件。邮件内容须包括:
■ 为线上图书馆提出合理建议;
■ 说明这样做的原因或好处。
范文:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Ming, a student in our school. In response to your collecting suggestions to establish an “online library”, I am writing to put forward my humble suggestions, hoping to be of some value.
Firstly, it benefits a lot to diversify the categories of books, thus enabling students to make proper choices and stimulate our reading interest. Besides, relevant technology should be improved, which can facilitate readers’ resource search. Last but not least, I think it necessary to set up an online book club where we can exchange ideas on what we read.
Hopefully my ideas will be helpful.
Yours
Liming
1.词汇积累
建议:suggestion→advice
激发阅读兴趣:stimulate reading interest→arouse reading interest
此外:besides→what’s more
有帮助的:helpful→useful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Firstly, it benefits a lot to diversify the categories of books, thus enabling students to make proper choices and stimulate our reading interest.
拓展句:Firstly, it benefits a lot to diversify the categories of books, which can enable students to make proper choices and stimulate our reading interest.
4.Directions: Write an English composition in 120- 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生李明,最近你校英语报正在开展关于社交媒体是否影响日常沟通的讨论。你对此话题很感兴趣, 请写一篇文章,内容包括:
1)你是否认为社交媒体影响了日常沟通;
2)你的理由。
范文:
With the increasing popularity of social media , there is a growing concern that frequent use of social media might have an impact on our real-life social skills. From my perspective, there is no denying that the emergence of social networking sites has indeed provided diversified ways for daily communication, but they also affect people’s daily communication to some extent.
To begin with, social networking sites tend to make people unable to extricate themselves. More and more people are so indulged in chatting with net friends at social networking sites that ignore the real world, which does harm to the maintenance of social relationships in reality.
What’s more, as teenagers in the modern society, we are expected to possess some key social skills, for example, identify and understand others’ feelings through their speech and actions. Over-reliance on social media, however, has inhibited us from building up those social abilities in some degree.
I admit that social networking sites have provided much convenience, but we shouldn’t allow them to take up too much of our life. Otherwise, we will end up as phubbers, merely knowing how to type and text but ignoring the proper way to communicate.
1.词汇积累
对……产生影响:have an impact on→ have an effect on
多样的:diversified→various
首先:to begin with→firstly
忽视:ignore→neglect
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To begin with, social networking sites tend to make people unable to extricate themselves.
拓展句:To begin with, many people are addicted to social networking sites so that they can’t extricate themselves.
5.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
学校将组织一次“我心目中的英雄”主题班会活动,请你以Heroes in My Heart为题,写一篇演讲稿。 基本要求如下:
•你心目中英雄的标准;
•你心目中英雄的事迹简介(请举1-2例);
•从这些英雄事迹中,你学到了些什么?
范文:
Some people think that a hero must be a person who has made outstanding contributions to the country or the world. Some people may regard the one who saved many lives as a superhero. In my heart, a hero must be an everyman who is helpful and brave in daily life. My father is such a person, who is always ready to help. My father is not only warmhearted but also very brave. Last summer, our family was on vacation at the beach. My father was watching my brother and me play in the water when a woman alerted him that two children in the deeper water appeared to be in danger. Hearing this, he immediately swam to the struggling kids. After doing his best to rescue the two kids successfully, my father got tired and exhausted. He told the reporter, “I took action out of instinct, and I was just doing what any dad would do.” My father set a good example for us, and his spirit will always inspire us to move on.
高级词汇有make contributions to(对……做出贡献),be always ready to help(乐于助人),regard as(认为),in danger(有危险),tired and exhausted(筋疲力尽)take action(采取行动),on vacation(度假)以及out of instinct(出于本能),而且还使用了定语从句“Some people think that a hero must be a person who has made outstanding contributions to the country or the world.”及“In my heart, a hero must be an everyman who is helpful and brave in daily life.”,非限定性定语从句“My father is such a person, who is always ready to help.”,宾语从句“My father was watching my brother and me play in the water when a woman alerted him that two children in the deeper water appeared to be in danger.”及“I took action out of instinct, and I was just doing what any dad would do.”,非谓语动词“Hearing this, he immediately swam to the struggling kids.”,而且还使用了be doing when句型,全文没有语法错误,上下句转换自然流畅。

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