my name is Mike today is wendesday morning i have a guitar class in the afternoon i have play piano class.in the morning i eating nooldles or eating bread.in the noon i often eating pig.in the evening i eating rice.in the weekend i often playing computer games and looking books......
点评：
这是一篇根据所给提示写的小作文。基本上运用到了所要求的关键词。
整篇小作文，从整体上看，大小写和标点符号运用不足，比如句子的首字母要大写、表示星期之类的单词首字母要大写等。另外，一些短语的搭配运用错误，比如：看书应该是read a book，在中午应该说at noon，还有部分动词形式的不当，如应说I often play...
另外，小作文在进行描写时能关注一定的逻辑性或者说条理性，会更好些，增加文章的可读性，不致于东一句西一句的零乱。
现在我们将上面这篇作文修改如下：
My name is Mike.Today is Wednesday.(第一段简单先作个总体介绍）
I get up at seven o'clock in the morning.I have noodles and some bread for my breakfast.I often have meat,vegetables and rice for my lunch and supper.I like meat.（第二段描写一天的饮食爱好）
I am busy in summer holidays.In the morning,I have a guitar class.In the afternoon,I have piano class.My teacher says I play well.I like to play guitar and piano.（第三段描写一天里的活动安排）
On weekends,I play computer games and read some books.（第四段描写周末的活动或自己的爱好）