May 3rd

Dear Miss Yuan，

How are you! I’m Sisi. I was very happy on Labour Day. Because I went to Wu hang by the hight-speed railway with my family.On the first day I went to visited my aunt. I lived there for a night.In the evening,I had fun with my cousins.We played games on line.The next day,we went to East Lake to see flowers.And then,we climbed mountains.We ate good food near the lake at noon.In the afternoon,we visited the Wuhan University.I want to be a university student there in my future.On the third day,we visited Huanghe Building.After lunch,we came back to Dongguan.For the last night of the holiday,we relaxed and prepared to go back to work or school.

What about your holiday? Can you tell me ,please?

Yours，

Sisi

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