江西省2013年中考英语书面表达

母爱情深，母爱无价；学会感恩，学会回报。某英语网站举办以”My Mother”为题的英语征文活动。请你根据下列思维导图提供的信息，写一篇短文，介绍自己的母亲和你们的真实故事。

提示：1.短文应包括导图中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明；

      2．短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；

      3．词数不少于80，开头已给出，不讲入总词数。

My mother

    We need love. We also need to love. The person I love most is my mother.

One possible version

One Possible Version

My mother

We need love. We also need to love. The person I love most is my mother. The person I love most is my mother. My mother is 41 years old. She is of medium build with long black hair. Shi is quiet. She is a history teacher in a middle school. She likes dancing. She can cook delicious food.

She did a lot for me when I was a child. She bought whatever I needed for my study, even though she didn’t have much money. She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend. She cooked delicious and healthy food for me.

When I grow up, I will do what I can to make my mother happy. I will find a good job after I graduate from college. I’ll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young. I’ll take her to wonderful sights around China. Most importantly, I will stay with her when I have free time. That’s what she wants most, I think.（来源: 给力英语网 https://www.geilien.cn）

评分意见：

    （一）总体原则

          考查学生综合运用语言知识的能力，注重语言表达的意义和流畅性。

（二）内容要点

      1. Introduction

        ①age    ②job     ③look     ④ability     ⑤hobby

      2. What she did for you

      3. What you will do for her

  (三) 评分档次

      1. 第一档（13-15分）

         信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。

      2. 第二档（10-12分）

         信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量错误，但不影响意思表达。

      3. 第三档（7-9分）

         能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，但句子基本可读。

      4. 第四档（4-6分）

         只能传递少量信息，表达不通顺，只有少量句子可读。

      5. 第五档（1-3分）

         只能传递个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。

 （四）建议

       3个内容要点，每个要点各5分。第一个内容的要点的5点信息不必按所给次序表达，每点信息各1分。