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Write at least 60 words about the topic “My progress”. (以“我进步了”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 你在生活或学习中一定取得过不少进步，比如生活技能的获得、学习方法的掌握、良好习惯的养成。请选取其中一个方面，结合自身经历，谈一谈你是如何取得这一进步的。 （注意：文中不得出现任何姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） The following is for reference only (以下表达仅供参考) used to do/ be … try my best to … make progress in (doing) … 何老师原创范文： My progress I used to be poor at English, especially(用especially是为了写具体点) in reading and writing(英语不就包括听说读写嘛) which I consider extremely difficult. The biggest problem was that after reading a passage, I couldn’t fully understand it, which makes me feel very depressed and frustrated(这两个词不会用的话可以考虑用考纲词upset，甚至sad). But I kept on reading difficult English articles instead of just giving up. And I I also practiced English writing whenever I had a chance. (具体写我的奋斗过程，没有过程哪来的结果？) Little by little (也可以用Gradually), I made remarkable(这个词同学们要是不会可以简单地换为much) progress in English and gained(也可以选用picked up) a lot of confidence(写着写着就回归到信心这个永恒的主题上来了) through my constant(这个词要是不会可以简单地换为hard) effort. As you can imagine, nothing makes me prouder than feeling my progress in English. My dear reader, as long as you bravely face your weaknesses and take effective ways to overcome them, I believe you will, like I do, be able to see your progress in yourself.（由己及他，升华主题） 潘佳莉老师范文 My progress Life is full of ups and downs, so is my middle school life. I used to be a shy girl who dare not exchange my ideas with my classmates, which is extremely bad for my study. Therefore, I made up my mind to become more outgoing. At first, it was tough for me to involve myself in the group discussion or to join in after-school activities. Luckily, with the encouragement from my friends, I managed to express my own thoughts and do some volunteering in my spare time. It seems that I am not that shy girl any more, which is definitely a great progress I have ever made. Just as an old saying goes, a thousand-li journey begins with the first step. However difficult it is, I should take the first step and make progress little by little. |
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