I have a funny classmate. His name is Mike. He has two big eyes, a small mouth and long hair.
Listen! He is singing funny songs. You must think why he is so happy. I will tell you.
He always does something, you don’t know to laugh or cry. Last Monday, he had an experience. He went to school on foot. Suddenly, a strong man jumped out. The man said:“Hi, little boy, tell me how to the bank?” Mike thought that man wasn’t a good guy, maybe he was a robber. But Mike didn’t be afraid, he said: “ Oh, My dear strong man! I am not a boy, I’m a girl. I don’t know how to get to the bank. So can I go to school?” The man was angry, then shouted: “ Go! Go! Go!” He was so happy to deal with that bad man.
Now his mother is going to buy him a present to praise him. He is so happy. Oh, look! He is dancing ridiculously. How funny! Do you like him? （六（1）李岚婷;辅导教师：许彤）
点评：看完这篇作文不禁笑出声来，一个又聪明、勇敢又滑稽的男孩从作者的笔下一点一点的刻画出来，生动、形象，在小学生的作文中能看到这样的文章，很难得。