I am Ruby. I’m 13. Now let me tell you something about my weekend.
I often read books, do housework and play sports on the weekend. But last Sunday was my grandma’s birthday. So I bought presents for my grandma on Saturday morning. Then I went to the bookstore in the afternoon. I like reading story-books. I found them very interesting. So I bought some story-books and a notebook. Then I went home.
On Sunday morning I visited my grandparents with my parents. We went shopping together. In the afternoon we went fishing. We had a big dinner in the evening. After dinner, we watched TV together. We were very happy.
I am going to Dongguan next weekend. I think it is going to be busy. I hope everyone can enjoy their weekends.（（六（4）黄妹,指导教师：曹娟）
点评：文章的语法、句型运用得非常准确，文章也中规中矩。但是通读全文，没有感觉这个周末有多么“funny”,希望可以在文章内容上再多下功夫。