【要点领悟】
有的同学在写作时常常把一些习惯用语、固定词组及结构错误搭配,结果写出来的句子让人看不懂。我们在平时若将这些英语基础知识牢固掌握,考试时就会得心应手、从容自若。
【信息提示】
2005年10月1日 星期六 睛
昨天你叔叔打电话来,请你找几个朋友去他农场收桔子。于是今天早上6点,你和朋友就坐汽车出发了。一到农场便开始干活。桔子树上结满了桔子,你们又摘桔子又装车,忙完后在那儿吃了午餐,还吃了不少桔子。下午坐卡车回家。你们虽然忙了一天,却感到非常快乐。
请根据以上提示写一篇80词左右的英语日记。请注意日记的格式。
【习作实况】
October 1, 2005, Saturday Sunny
My uncle called me yesterday. He said in the phone (1) that he had an orange harvest. He needed some help. He asked me to go there with my friends.
Today morning (2) we left home at 6:00. We went there by a bus (3). The trees in (4) the farm were really full with (5) oranges. When we got there, we began to work at once. We picked a lot of oranges and put them in the boxes. Some strong boys carried the boxes into a truck. After work, we had the lunch (6) at my uncle’s house. We had many oranges, too. In the afternoon, we came back home by truck. We were busy today, but we were happy.
【精讲点拨】
(1) “在电话里说……”应用介词on。
(2) “今天上午”的英语说法是this morning。
(3) by+交通工具名词时,其间不用冠词或其他修饰词。
(4) “在农场里”介词用on,应是on the farm。
(5) “……充(结)满……”有两种表示方法,be full of ... 或be filled with...。
(6) 英语中在表示吃一日三餐时,三餐前不加冠词。
【精品范文】
October 1, 2005, Saturday Sunny
My uncle called me yesterday. He said on the phone that he had an orange harvest. He needed some help. He asked me to go there with my friends.
This morning we left home at 6:00. We went there by bus. The trees on the farm were really full of oranges. When we got there, we began to work at once. We picked a lot of oranges and put them in the boxes. Some strong boys carried the boxes into a truck. After work, we had lunch at my uncle’s house. We had many oranges, too. In the afternoon, we came back home by truck.
We were busy today, but we were happy.